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WatchingWhen the little caterpillar wrigglesAlong the tree, I follow it with myEyes; When the fish swims against theStream, I sit and watch for hours. I watchBirds fly around in the sky and bees onFlowers.Does this mean I have too much time on my hands?
The Girl in the white dressThe white dress was laid in front of her. She closed her eyes and sighed. She hated it. It was the dress she's dreamed about since she was little, although she was still little now. But she hated it. Her mother had ordered it for her, and the seamstress has spent months making it. Money was no object. Her Father wanted her to be the prettiest girl there and wanted to show her off. He was proud of her. But she still hated it. The Maid put on the necklace her father had given her for her 14th birthday, a week ago. It was of pure gold, with a sparkling diamond. It looked expensive, and it was. But her father had bought it for this very day, and as the maid wrapped it around her neck, she felt the coldness of the money, and the coldness of her father.The dress stared at her, almost haunting her. She had seen it in at her home in Spain, and had loved it, but here in cold, stone, "home" in England, it horrified her. The maid picked the little girl up with ease and placed her on the
EscapeTwo people are couching behind a wall on stage. A is holding his head, and looking to see if anyone is coming and B is staring at the back of the auditorium in an unsettling way. A: It hurts.B: I knowA: No you don'tB: You're right. I just thought-A: Well don't think. Thinking leads you into this mess.B: I'm sorry, but we had to get out of there.A: We
no my friend, I was fine.B: You was unhappyA: I'm bi polar, of course I'm un-bloody-happyB: but-A: Two words, Free. FoodB: but-A: shut up, good two personalitiesB: you can talk
A: You'd better have taken your medicationB: He did.A: oh for god - , if you kill, I swear to god-B: Someone's comingA: good, I'll get their attention. A goes to stand up, but B puts his hand over A's mouth and drags him down. After a little while B releases his grip A: (standing) What the hell!B: I don't want to go backA: But I was comfy there! This is kidnap you know!B: I know
I'm scared. I don't know what